Notebook Poetry: The Candle

candle_by_Alorn
To the wick, this candle burns
waning
into the collapsing night
it’s a lonesome orb that glitters
and flutters
like a captured pixie
trapped behind the walls
of a glass bottle,
an empty phial.

This star-prick, a singular light
against the matte black
of darkest
firmament, is devoid
of celestial bodies;
an errant mote of dust
the dance
of an entranced moth.

The room is still,
almost quiet
and not a single
cosmic
breath
should stir
but
a faint
rustle
of leaves
outside
a distant window.

7 thoughts on “Notebook Poetry: The Candle

  1. I enjoyed this immensely, though I’ll admit that I am not as well-versed in poetry as I am in the world of literary fiction. I especially appreciate the trio of movement here: the pixie, the moth and the rustling leaves.

    To be sure, you can cascade text in WordPress (here is an example. I use the Indent button to achieve this, which looks like a few black bars with a blue arrow next to it, pointing right.

    If you can’t see that button when you’re editing, press Alt +Shift + Z to hide/show the “Kitchen Sink”, which includes some additional buttons.

    I hope that helps.

  2. Pingback: The Candle (Sonnet) | Writing and Whiskey

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