
To the wick, this candle burns
waning
into the collapsing night
it’s a lonesome orb that glitters
and flutters
like a captured pixie
trapped behind the walls
of a glass bottle,
an empty phial.
This star-prick, a singular light
against the matte black
of darkest
firmament, is devoid
of celestial bodies;
an errant mote of dust
the dance
of an entranced moth.
The room is still,
almost quiet
and not a single
cosmic
breath
should stir
but
a faint
rustle
of leaves
outside
a distant window.
That was an excellent post today. Thanks so much for sharing it. I
really enjoyed reading it very much. You have a wonderful day!
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Lovely, lyrical metaphor with wonderful imagery. Well done.
Thank you!!!!
I enjoyed this immensely, though I’ll admit that I am not as well-versed in poetry as I am in the world of literary fiction. I especially appreciate the trio of movement here: the pixie, the moth and the rustling leaves.
To be sure, you can cascade text in WordPress (here is an example. I use the Indent button to achieve this, which looks like a few black bars with a blue arrow next to it, pointing right.
If you can’t see that button when you’re editing, press Alt +Shift + Z to hide/show the “Kitchen Sink”, which includes some additional buttons.
I hope that helps.
Right! The kitchen sink. I just discovered it, I never thought to look. I’ll update accordingly. I’m glad you liked it. I’m glad everyone did. ^_^
I always start at the kitchen sink, then move to the more obvious hiding places.
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